I'm thinking of making a song, and so far the lyrics(which this song is a christmas song, kida late/early huh?) go:

When I believed in Santa, I wanted to get up early.
When I believed in Santa, I thought what would be?
When I believed in Santa, I wondered if you truly was thee.
When I believed in Santa, I thought was he history.

Because every christmas day and every christmas night, the thought I had to fight, was the thought of losing him and losing my mind from the fact that I,
may just run away.

When I looked for Santa, I thought I would find something.
When I looked for Santa, I wondered if I had a chance to say.
When I looked for Santa, I read about him and thew the book away
When I looked for Santa, I looked for him and thought of, wasting away

Because every christmas day and every christmas night, the thought I had to fight, was the thought of losing him and losing my mind from the fact that I,
may just run away!

(plays a christmasy rock like tune)

Because every christmas day and every christmas night,(echo: Because every christmas day and every christmas night) the thought I had to fight,(echo:the thought I had to fight) was the thought of losing him and losing my mind from the fact that I,(echo:was the thought of losing him and losing my mind from the fact that I)
may just run away!(echo:may just run away)







Thanks for looking, love to see what you guys think.

Wow Pyro. I'm honestly not sure what to think! Seems ... angsy. Hard rock beat or is it more of a metal song?

Well it's meant to be a type of rock.

...something in the vein of Trans Siberian Orchestra type "Christmas rock", then, or is it more like an Aerosmith does Good King Wenceslas kind of rock?

The lyrics aren't bad by themselves but, without an idea of the music that might go along with them, it's kind of difficult to interpret the "flow," you know? Like I said, though, not at all a bad start... I'll be interested to see how it progresses.

death metal

I'm not sure Eol, because I just thought it up while doing homework, but I don't want a orchestra feel, but I do want a Christmas Rock feel, and the other song I just plain don't know.

my chemical romance it is then xD

nah really what type of Christmas rock? Bobby helms? John Lennon? Beach Boys?

What do you think I was born the same day my Dad was, cause that would be wierd. I know the Beach Boys and Tran Syberian Orchestra, and my song could probably be in the area of Tran Syberian Orchestra, but no not Beach Boys. I was thinking of a remix of Carol of the Bells by Trans Syberian Orchestra, does that answer your questions, oh yeah not to be threatning(even though this isn't much of a threat) I'm going to lose my temper next question about the type of song. O.K., sorry about this but geez I'm in the new generation I barely know these people, O.K.?

Calm down man! You probably know most of these people from their Christmas carols they've done. Bobby Helms did Jingle Bell Rock, Lennon did Merry Xmas the war is over.

You can always plug their names into Google and get some inspiration.

Don't go losing your temper you might never find it.

but I just lose my temper at times. Well, I hope I will find it, but for real, I did think it was like a Trans Syberian Orchestra Carol of the Bells remix.

So high strung. If he was an animal, he'd be a cat strung out on catnip. lol

your an artist too! Remember dreamin'?
But whatever the case, you have to remember. If I get mad, go nuts, go crazy, and/or break the rules of the site you and the site creator Tcatt(and others) are responsible for me. But it will be my responsibility to control myself.