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Cheshire Cad
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My Next Story

Ok, so you guys seemed to like my first story. I attempted to write a prequel for you guys, but I wasnt feeling the vibe, and it came out like crap. My apologies, maybe next time. That said, I've got the vibe again, so there's a new story headed your way (unless you dont wanna read it of course). I've posted the summary here. If you like the way it sounds, give me a shout out... Its more motivation to write!

Many generations have passed since Raina Orelon fought against the twisted sorceror, Dratarcan. In that time, the Elven people have begun to lose themselves. A puppet King sits upon the Elven throne. Humans began settling in Elven lands, and with them they brought greed, violence, and corruption.... all of the things common of such a short-sighted, short-lived race. With the flux of humans, common became the language of commerce, and so the language of the land, with Elven being relegated to dusty old tomes on the top shelves in the darkest corners of libraries.

It is into such a world that Aran and Amy are born. They are a raritiy among rarities, being not only Elves, but Elven twins. Although they know it not, they shall be the catalyst; the instrument of....



Thats sounds a little cornier now than it did... but anyway... thoughts?

Posted on 2011-02-09 at 14:22:20.
Edited on 2011-02-09 at 14:50:17 by Chessicfayth

Pit F(r)iend
Welcome Waggin'
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Hey, good is good and that's all I need, guy!

I'm already excited about this, what with rare Elvish twins and the coming of some apocalyptic Great Purge. . .let it thus be brought!

Posted on 2011-02-09 at 14:30:38.

Eol Fefalas
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Well done...

...definitely an intro that should be followed up, IMO... I'd read it.

Please do continue.

Oh... and you missed an "e" in relegated...

Posted on 2011-02-09 at 14:49:14.

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way to leave me hanging, Chessic.
Why yes, I am interested to read your story. Because that teaser was exactly that -- it teased me. I MUST BE SATISFIED!
So yes, please, continue...

Posted on 2011-02-09 at 15:29:24.

Cheshire Cad
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thanks Eol, got the typo fixed

Posted on 2011-02-10 at 13:55:26.

Cheshire Cad
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and now, for a quite shameless....


Posted on 2011-02-12 at 15:52:16.

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