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Skari-dono
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Assistance Appreciated

Seeing as I have just turned one year older, I figured it was time to do something about my absence.

I have been working on a role-playing game for the last few months that I really want to get out there to the world. It has gone through some changes during that time, going from one resolution system to another, but today I finished a playtest-worthy version in Word. Meager 30 thousand words, it is just shy of 90 pages long (mostly thanks to the table of contents).

What I need now is someone to assist me a little bit by reading over the draft and see if they find any obvious error or contradictions. I also need to know if I have managed to present the system in a way that can be understood.

I don't have many requirements. You don't have to be a role-playing games savant, although knowing the common terms (like d12 and GM) is a plus. The game is a roll-equal-or-under type using a d12, level based and there is room for customization.

If you are interested in reading this over for me, I would be very grateful. You can send me a PM and we can talk some more about it there.

Also, hello people, it's good to know I can swing by every now and then


Posted on 2014-02-21 at 21:14:07.

Grugg
Gregg
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asdf

Holy crap I was just thinking about you the other day. Good to see you, glad you're not dead.

Also I'd love to read it over, if you'll let me.



Posted on 2014-02-22 at 01:28:14.

Jozan1
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,

Same, if you want send me a PM and I'll read it too.


Posted on 2014-02-22 at 02:10:33.

Skari-dono
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THANKS!!!

Thank you guys. I knew I could count on the Inn for help

I've sent you a PM with a download link.


Posted on 2014-02-22 at 08:36:23.

Jozan1
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,

Reading through it now, on page 35. I'm keeping a log of things I think you're looking for.


Posted on 2014-02-22 at 23:44:51.

Skari-dono
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1514 Posts


Yay!

Excellent, glad to hear it


Posted on 2014-02-22 at 23:57:15.

Grugg
Gregg
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6191 Posts


asdf

Will be delving in myself once olympic hockey wraps up.

Bit of a frenzy here currently.

Sorry America.


Posted on 2014-02-23 at 01:52:15.

Skari-dono
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1514 Posts


Character Sheet

I'm sure you're doing professional jobs, finding errors and whatnot, so I'm going to show you the character sheet I made and intend to use for the play test, pending possible changes if required.

Click here!


Posted on 2014-02-26 at 09:28:54.

Grugg
Gregg
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adro

Finally got a moment to crack into this hard.

48 pages down.

This is a long read.

But goddamn if it isn't a game I really want to play so far.


Posted on 2014-03-13 at 03:27:13.

Skari-dono
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1514 Posts


Yay

It is a long read indeed, so I've applauded you for your efforts

87 pages (including table of contents), in case anyone was wondering


Posted on 2014-03-14 at 12:20:10.

Alacrity
The Tired
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I'll be your huckleberry

I am not flushed with time but I am right now suffering from an ennui about D&D so maybe this will light my fire again.


Posted on 2014-03-15 at 17:09:25.

Grugg
Gregg
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adf

Just thinking about that soft 'stache stroking the pages while he peruses it has made me remember why I joined this site.

I think?



Posted on 2014-03-15 at 17:15:07.

Skari-dono
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1514 Posts


Whee!

Alacrity to the rescue! He has replied with some great comments and fairly detailed notes (detailed enough for me anyway) so I am going ahead and implementing what changes need to be made. Hopefully, I can release the game for public play-testing soon

To the rest of you whom I sent a copy of the file to review, I would still like to read any comments you might have. Anything that could be beneficial for the game is still a welcome addition.


Posted on 2014-03-28 at 16:20:09.

   
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