Strip #13 is now up. As always, comments, discussion, and criticism are all welcome.

As i often say - without a monster or two, plus traps, it isn't an adventure! It is just a group of friends wandering around in the dark.

Panel 5 confused me a bit. Because of the text splitting it up like that I thought it was panel 5 and the lower part was panel 8, which kinda ruined the flow for me.

Also, neon-zombie

Paranoia is a learned response.

I learned in from various DMs

Same boat as Skari, that panel direction switch threw me off greatly.

We hear and listen to your whining.

All I can say is - hey, we're new to this. Sometimes, we try cool layout things that are great. Sometimes, they are not.

Slowest traffic to the newest comic in a couple of weeks. Is there a strike?

In other words....kiddos are back at school...low traffic is explained

If I can gather anything from the other webcomics I read, it takes time. You want the quick hits, throw in sex.

Oh, I know that. I'm just a tad disappointed that the steady growth I've seen has been set back a bit this week.

That's all.

That means next week is just going to be 20 panels of comic sex doesn't it...

the direction issue bothered me a bit too. Not too much though.

You can solve this problem by simply adding arrows that lead the reader in the right direction. If you orchestrate it like that, it's no longer confusing, it's artistic freedom.

Sorry I haven't posted in a while. School's been piling it on and I just had openinng ceremonies for soccer.

Anyways, this strip was different battle-wise in the sense that Dalana finally killed something. It's about time someone other than Aranion got damaged.

Good work.