Pretty much what I would've expected from Dana, too. Well done!
Just one thing, though... Dr Reine may have been on board for a few days, by the time of your post... I'm working with Breebles, now, to get an intro/opening post for the new Doc and, if I'm not mistaken, we have her coming aboard a few days ago. 
Apologies for any inconvenience, btw... Always some little continuity things when a new game/chapter starts... especially when new characters and/or players are involved. The post is great, as I said, but maybe put a pin in the Doc's time of arrival. 