You awake and all is a blur, someone you cant make out who is dragging you muttering ineligible words under his breath "Nokdu ins nir tin ger." Before you know it you are sat in a chair your body gently sagging in the wooden structure. A man dressed in full red the man who had dragged you was shouting orders and as you look around you see three others slumped in chairs in a similar way too you.

Slowly you regain conciousness and as you do the man in res barks at you "You are the chosen YOU will save us YOU are the messiah go my children flee with haste you must get to the capital run, for you are the chosen. Ask him ask the leader for help he will come HE WILL COME I SAY."

Once more you are dragged although on your feet this time until outside the city gates the guards on top of the tower gazing down on you like solid birds of prey. automatically you look back to what is your home and see just a black abyss although an orange fire seems to be burning far in the distance, clearly you must hurry.

I read your opening post more than once and thought long and hard before I posted this.

For me, there are simply too many things wrong with the opening post for me to even begin to seem diplomatic about how to correct them.

In a nutshell, the post doesn't even come close to the premise described in your recruit thread.

If you are interested, I will answer any questions about my feelings and offer suggestions via PM, but they are too extensive to take place during a game that is supposedly in progress ...

I will apologize for any inconvenience, but I just cannot -- I just can't ...